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Post by Matt Finch on Dec 2, 2010 1:03:57 GMT -5
Nice bio, but there a few things that need dealing with: 1) Could you expand on the strengths and weaknesses? Some of them (like worldly and naive) seem to contradict each other, so please explain that. 2) I like the history, though I'd like to see more on how he actually landed a job at Hogwarts. There aren't many, after all. 3) Not really something that needs editing, but since synesthesia is an actual medical condition, be careful how you handle it. I think that's all for now. Make these edits, and I should be able to accept your bio.
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Post by Matt Finch on Dec 2, 2010 1:49:20 GMT -5
Alright, nicely done. Should be a nice addition to the staff table at dinner. ^^
Approved.
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